Proofread the paper you previously wrote with the updated final rubric and teacher’s comment.
Your draft is a good base for the final paper. You discuss the policies around covid as your ethical problem and apply different frameworks to it. You say you are using 3 frameworks, Kant, Mill and Hinman. But I’m wondering if your paper would be clearer if you didn’t think of Hinman as a moral/ethical framework, but more as the context and background for thinking of an issue as a moral issue. I had to read your paper a few times to really get what you were saying.